It looks great....what's happening though?
he's transforming. maybe it's too subtle, or not subtle enough. i thought the bottom frame would give it away, but maybe someone will have to clarify it in the next page.
He transmorphed into the creature of the costume he was wearing and then beheaded the flat-headed dude that was beside him and then merged with the cube vomitspit?I think that's it.
In Osciel's addition, flat head gets blasted through the torso, costume kid transforms into his costume, and the dude with the portal brain starts cubing out. On this page, transformed costume kid mourns flat head's death, and portal head starts growing in size and scariness while cube face watches passively. i guess this is the mess i get for stepping away from the typical panel to panel convention. if it's a disaster, we can pretend it never happened.
I dig it, and understood it, though it took me a while to get who the big guy was. he kind is starting to look like the chupacabras. hahaha. what stumps me is where to take it from here. someone else needs to try and tame this beast.
I SO get it now. Ima do the next page.Objections?
cool. i may try and make some adjustments tomorrow for readability. now that i look at it, the big dude is starting to freak me out as well.
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