Forgive me on this one. I sort of tossed this together with no sketch in photoshop. Also I hope I'm not stealing a page from someone, didn't really ask.
Yeah the whole thing feels more like a sketch to me. Sept I like the panels as they are. But If someone wants to change em up tsall good, I'm not a comic artist so yeah I know nothin.
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it looks great, d.
Glad to see it. Darken summa dem shadows, tho, namean.
well, while we're offering critique,
i think the overall page could be greatly improved if the last two panels were reconsidered
Yeah the whole thing feels more like a sketch to me. Sept I like the panels as they are. But If someone wants to change em up tsall good, I'm not a comic artist so yeah I know nothin.
Imma chime back in,
Dustin, you just drew a comic page. Congratulations, you're a comic artist, phagh.
Also, definitely don't change that second to last; it looks too cool, even if it's slightly ambiguous.
Last one though, I agree on.
just give the last panel a dong and itll be straight.
This Page is sweet. I can see that it is rough. If you choose to flush it out it has the potential of being really great!
Good to see more contributions
Fauxmo LIVES!
I certainly haven't been doing my part. for this I am sorry. Sorry guys
"weeping"
so did you call dibs on this page patrick? or is it still up in the air?
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