I feel like everyone is dancing around what should actually happen next. maybe someone can actually take this somewhere on the next page. lookin' cool though, I just wish the little monster still looked as fierce as he did in my last panel.
WHY DON'T YOU DO SOMETHING ABOUT IT THEN OSCIELHa ha, I'm just seriously kidding. Serious. If no one touches this thread by the time I'm done with the page I'm doing, I'll do this one afterwards.
He's sposed to be mid-air in the last panel; a full-on rampage on the giant dude who's to blame for his flat-headed friend's demise.I'd say an assault is development, but I'd be wrong I guess. Jon, you better salvage this and hard.
errr, but the big dude didn't kill flathead, it was cube man. check osciel's mid panel.i'll do it, yargh matey, i've got some ideas.
Yikesies. Misplaced agression?...retcon?Can it be saved?
definitely will be saved
Hey Jon, you still doing next page for this, I just got an idea on how to open it up a bit.
i haven't started. you go ahead and take it. it's all yours'.
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